Yummy Persimmons
Persimmons taste like walnuts.
Crunchie hard persimmons. Mmm mmm so yummy so yummy.
persimmons are crunchy like apples.
Crunchy round persimmons slowly go down my throat into my stomach.
terrific persimmons tastes so yummy.
the seeds are so hard as hard as rocks.
Did you know persimmons first grow and China.
I tried my first person for the first time and it was delicious I was nervous to try my first persimmon.
Well done using a did you know question. Next time use a ?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Jojo,
ReplyDeleteI like how you are really descriptive about your writing and how you keep describing how you feel about it.
I learnt that you really like persimmons and are good at writing.
I think you should stop using the same words and use different words.
How long did this take you to write ?
Why did you write about persimmons ?
I like how you told us some facts about persimmons.
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